The Test Drive

A short story –

The air in the luxury car showroom smelled like polished leather and ambition. The marble floors gleamed, catching the reflections of chrome grilles and high-heeled shoes. Salesmen in slick suits prowled the floor like panthers in cologne, eyes always scanning for wealth stitched into suits or heels.

Chris stood near the back, organizing brochures beside a gleaming midnight blue Aston. He wasn’t the flashiest. No tailored suit, no shiny watch. Just a genuine smile and a sharp eye for people—not wallets.

That’s when the glass doors whooshed open with a faint hiss, and someone walked in.

A man—mid-50s, average height, wearing faded jeans, worn sneakers, and a simple gray hoodie.

The room seemed to pause. One salesman glanced, then looked away. Another whispered behind a hand, lips curling into the familiar smirk that said: Not worth it.

But Chris?

Chris stepped forward and smiled like the man wore a crown.

“Good afternoon, sir. Welcome!” Chris said warmly, offering his hand.

The man blinked. “You… you talking to me?”

“Of course,” Chris chuckled. “Unless your twin just walked in behind you.”

A laugh cracked the man’s puzzled expression. “Well… not planning to buy anything today. Just browsing.”

Chris gestured to the rows of gleaming metal beasts with gentle pride. “That’s what they’re here for. What catches your eye?”

The man’s hand brushed the curves of a red Maserati, almost shyly. “They’re beautiful. But people usually don’t talk to me in places like this.”

Chris shrugged. “I talk to humans, not price tags. Want to take it for a test drive?”

That stopped him cold. “You serious?”

Chris only smiled. “Life’s too short not to feel a V8 purr under your fingertips.”

The city peeled away behind them as they cruised onto the quiet, tree-lined stretch just outside town. The engine murmured like a beast on a leash. Wind brushed past the windows like soft whispers.

“I’m Chris, by the way.”

The man nodded, hands light on the wheel.

“Martin.”

They drove in comfortable silence for a few minutes before Martin asked,

“Why did you approach me back there?”

Chris looked out the window.

“You walked in with curiosity. That’s all that mattered.”

Martin studied him for a moment.

“You’re rare, you know.”

Chris smiled.

“So I’ve been told. Usually by my dog.”

That made Martin laugh—really laugh. Not the polite chuckle people give when they want something. The kind that echoed in the chest.

They talked after that. About simple things. Music. Family. Regret. Martin mentioned his wife had passed five years ago. Chris shared how he’d worked two jobs to help his little brother through college.

There was something easy in their conversation. Like old friends who’d just remembered they knew each other.

Back at the showroom, Martin turned off the engine and sat quietly for a moment.

“You mind if I ask something strange?” he said.

Chris raised an eyebrow.

“Go ahead.”

“If I gave you my address… would you visit me sometime? I’d like to show you something.”

Chris blinked.

“Sure. Why not?”

Martin scribbled it down on the back of a napkin. His hand trembled slightly.

“Thank you,” he said, more seriously now. “Really.”

Three days later, Chris followed his GPS into the hills north of town. As he turned the final corner, he had to blink.

A massive wrought-iron gate opened slowly, revealing a sprawling estate perched like a crown jewel on the hill. Marble steps. Glass walls. A manicured lawn that looked like velvet.

A butler opened the door.

Chris stood frozen at the threshold until Martin appeared, wearing the same hoodie—but barefoot and smiling wide.

“Come in, Chris,” he said, like he’d been waiting a lifetime.

They sat in the sun-drenched atrium with birdsong outside and the smell of jasmine floating in from the garden.

Martin leaned forward, his eyes steady now.

“I run a network of luxury dealerships,” he said. “We’re opening a new branch in this city. I came to your showroom that day for one reason.”

Chris tilted his head.

“To find someone who wouldn’t judge me by my shoes. Who would treat me like a man, not a wallet. Someone with soul.”

Chris opened his mouth—but found no words.

“I want you to manage that branch,” Martin said simply. “Build a team like you. From the inside out.”

The only sound for a moment was the water trickling from a small fountain in the corner.

Chris exhaled, the weight of disbelief pressing against his chest like warm sunlight.

He didn’t say yes right away. He didn’t need to. It was written in the smile that crept across his face.

Somewhere beyond the hills, a Maserati hummed down a quiet road.

But inside the mansion, it was Chris’s heart that purred louder than any engine.

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